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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far. Can't wait to read more of it. Keep up the good work.
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow,that was good the last chapter was the best,please update soon.
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ wow that was great ... i love it ... please please update soon i would love ot read more ...later for now
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is really starting to get really really alsome i think you should put in 10 more chapters right now
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes,i loved the last chapter,i think it will be Ron or Mrs. Weasly at the door
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting plot so far. I really enjoy reading your story. Spelling and grammar are a bit of a problem though. Some of the sentences ("Give me it" instead of "give it to me" for example) made me think that english was not your mother tongue (neither am I). After looking at your profile, I guess you are from Brazil (or living there). That being said, I believe your story deserve a beta and maybe also to be posted on Portkey.org (Harry/Hermione ship website). Thanks for your work and do continue.
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First of all, I like the plot. But you need to check your spelling and grammer errors. Otherwise, I thought it was a good story.
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
they have more then lust for each other ... please please please update soon i would love to read more ..later for now
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow go mione ... please please update soon ..later for now
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow please please please update soon i wouldlove to read more..later for now
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