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ohh no now what ... please please update soon ...later for now

angel

THat was really good ,but i wish Harry would said how he felt sooner.

Bastard! harry, that is...not you the author. Maybe Hermione will go seek solace with Ron.

your last last chapter should not have happened because, harry love's monie so much and i think that is the next key to find the next horcuxs is the LOVE that harry and monie have for each other, just like when harry's mother sacrrficed herself to save harry' life and LOVE is the key to destory it

you made the sentances to long AND STOP WITH THE LITTLE BOXES, @ THESE, % THESE, AND ANYTHING ELSE THAT MAKES IT LOOK JUNKY, because i had trouble reading the last four or five chapters you typed up.

To Chapter 15 and 16:
I hate to read stories, where the characters are acting so stupid, that it's hurt. I don't understand why there are so many stories with this kind of problem. Is it so much fun to write about people who are stupid? I don't understand. It's okay if they are in a short phase of denial, but here you have a Harry, who is so damn stupid, that I want to kill him every second. And this is all your fault, because you are writing him stupid. This is really hard to stand for me. I think I will skip a few chapters and get directly to the good stuff. Greetings.

ohh harry you dunce why did you say that you should have let her talk first..... man now what is going to happen .. please more ..later for now

angel

tonks your are so right the men in the house are thick .. please please please update soon ..later for now

angel

There are formating problems with chapters 11 & 13 please look these over as it is extremly hard to read them as they are

I think you need to reload chapter 11 it seenes to be messed up. Good story so far Harry/Hermione is one of my favorite pairings