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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I doubt my kids are going to boarding school so, for this to happen to me, I'll have to wait til the last one turns 18 and just hope to hell that none of them decide to live at home after that.
Very sweet story. Very believable, too.
Very sweet story. Very believable, too.
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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's BEAUTIFUL, LOVING, TENDER, SWEET, ENDEARING, FUNNY and NAUGHTY!
This is The Perfect Fic and should be on a site where it can be nominated to one of the BEST short love fanfic EVER.
What they share in this fic is what most of us dream of (I sure do) finding someday, that everlasting love, no matter how it ages or whatever problems it encounters along the way.
I love how you gave a lot of thought to details (how she aged her breast not firm anymore, how she describes his facial expressions when they're playing, the dirty talks and slangs), all those tiny things, that's what makes this fic so fantastic and so realistic even though magic is a very unrealistic topic.
And it's also; grammatically very well put together (something not even I can achief sometime)
If I had to gave this a rating from 1 to 10 it would go WAY past that ten! Job VERY weldone.
PS: Is it alright if I archieve it on my notebook for my own joy?!
This is The Perfect Fic and should be on a site where it can be nominated to one of the BEST short love fanfic EVER.
What they share in this fic is what most of us dream of (I sure do) finding someday, that everlasting love, no matter how it ages or whatever problems it encounters along the way.
I love how you gave a lot of thought to details (how she aged her breast not firm anymore, how she describes his facial expressions when they're playing, the dirty talks and slangs), all those tiny things, that's what makes this fic so fantastic and so realistic even though magic is a very unrealistic topic.
And it's also; grammatically very well put together (something not even I can achief sometime)
If I had to gave this a rating from 1 to 10 it would go WAY past that ten! Job VERY weldone.
PS: Is it alright if I archieve it on my notebook for my own joy?!
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dear inell,
you my friend have an amazing talent for writing, this has to be the best and most realistic fic i have ever read. It is written so well is loving and funny and brings out just what every h/hr fan could dream those two to be. you have done a brilliant job and hope you continue writing more. i hope this reaches you well and good luck in future writings.
-mason
you my friend have an amazing talent for writing, this has to be the best and most realistic fic i have ever read. It is written so well is loving and funny and brings out just what every h/hr fan could dream those two to be. you have done a brilliant job and hope you continue writing more. i hope this reaches you well and good luck in future writings.
-mason
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh how beautifully sweet and wonderfully written. Actually had tears in my eyes with the overwhelming perfection of their exchange at the end. Just tremendous.
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww, sweetie, that one was just wonderful! I loved them being an older couple and still all caught up in each other! You are amazing!
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A really good story! I like it a lot, particularly with regard to the lack of good H/HR stories on this side. Keep up the good work. Greetings THX1138