rate_review Reviews

hi
it's max speaking, i'm sorry if my english is not good but i'm french. i really love this fic, i hope you'll continue. i'm not really in mpreg, but this one seem quite good so please continue.
i think that a yaoi will be good, i don't think a girl will want to be with a man that carries a child...
for the pairing maybe a severus/remus or a severus/harry could be good too.
so keep on writing because it's really great.
see you
max

This is a great story!!!! I can't wait to see what you do next! Your skill is impressive, so please add the next chapter tommorow!!!

1)You should continue it.

2) I'm not sure if there should be a pairing.

keep going! this fic promises to be entertaining.

hey so far i like the fic. a lot. hehe. I think that a few more details about what the spell does would be awsome and maybe a sev/lucius fic, cuz like a harry or draco would just be wierd when the child would be older then his lover and he really hates sirius, james and lupin at this point....and pettygrew is just nasty. or maybe he could be found out and run to voldemort.....? a nice sev/voldie pairing hehe..

hey if you are gonna do a rape do a rape or make it that sevvie is so abused that being raped dry wouldn't bother him so much. cuz anal sex hurts. dry it hurts a fuck of a lot. but do continue i think it is interesting. a sev/voldie pairing could be interesting

I love it!!!!

You wish for an opinion on whether you should continue this fic or not? I believe that you should. It's different from what I've seen. Alright, I have seen the plot line before. I was the editor for the story, but this is a good take on the idea, and the fact that it takes place with Severus, and not Harry for once, makes it a lot more interesting.

As for the whole yaoi idea, that's personally up to you. It would be interesting to see, but that's just my personal opinion.

I do hope to see more of this story in the future.

Ok, I really do like where this is going. I have some few things I would like to point out, I thought that when talking about what happens for the time the fetus is frozen, there could have been a few more details (since Sev got it from a book). But other than that, I really liked it. I think that Dumbledore should find out somehow, maybe before the potions accident or afterwards and that there should be yaoi, but I just don't know of which pairing... maybe Severus/Harry, or Severus/Draco... or maybe the three of them together! ^.^ But what ever you decided, I'll read it, cause I really want to see where this is going to go.

i really like this story and i sincerly hope you continue with it.