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1: yes. 2: yes; lupin, james, or luscious. No1 decades yunger or older. 3: i would hav liked mor details @ the end 2ward how he went 2 the checkup, if he used polijuice or a spell, were he got the name from, and the place he cast the freeze spell. As 4 questions; will the 'father' make any mor appearancees??? Thats all. I honestly like the plot & execution of this story & hope u update it plz. Thank u

Rukia

You should deffinatly continue this story. The plots amazing and so is the way you've written it.

I really enjoyed the story so far. Please continue it, I can't wait for more chapters.

this was really interesting and i'd like to see more of it

mmm you should continue it. make it a harry and snape fic. since it is harry who unfreezes the baby it should be him that becomes its other daddy the plot is really good and you should continue it.

Well, to be honest....it's a wonderful beginning! :3 Definitely a new take on the mpreg scene, and that's saying something. Yaoi/slash is the way to go! but I'm just saying that because I am obsessed. *cough* But even if you were to make this a het fic, I'd continue to read.

Constructive criticism, eh? Ok, let's see: the wrtiing is good, direct and interesting, but you sound like you want to hurry up with what you're writing to get to the really important stuff. it's like the proloque is nothing but /necessary/, like you /have to/ write it. even if it might be so, at least pretend like you wnat to pull this part of the story to the length.

well, anyways, i can hardly wait for the main story!

1. I do think you should complete the story.

2. I think a decent pairing between remus and Snape or another male dominating character.

3. I honestly believe that this will develop into as great as story like 'the wolf's lifemate' Iwould love to see events in snape's life that happen akwardly because of the hormonal rebalancing. and wouldn't be insteresting at what point the child 'accidently' becomes unfrozen. You can have the male that would be paired off with snape walk in on the unfreee moment and a odd flashback things that happen that wasn't mentioned in the prolouge surface.

This story has so much potentail. Please don't let it go to waste

I loved your fic! YES continue it, and DEFINITELY include yaoi. I am of the Severus/James Potter fandom, but I guess for this time-line, perhaps some Snupin would suffice? (Snape/Lupin) If you're really up for a challenge, perhaps you might want to try a (very rare!) Sirius Black/Severus Snape fic. You could do all sorts of dramatic things with them. I LOVE the concept for this idea, also. I got into MPregs within the past couple years and it's rarely that I find an enjoyable fic. Cheers!

-Mike

I am incredibly curious as to this fic. There doesn't have to be M/M intercourse; just because its on AFF.net, doesn't mean there HAS to bee nookie - just themes that aren't suitable for under 18s.

I am a Biology student, and cryogenics is something one of my lecturers at uni is really into - he's actually attempting something similar to that spell for plants! (what a coincidence?! lol). Embryos are frozen in IVF and then they can be thawed out and 'put back'. A crude explanation, but I've been in lectures ALL day (9 to 5).

I'd personally, really like to see where this story goes. It is incredibly unique and shows a side of Snape we don't normally see, his attitude to the 'bump' was utterly adorable; where does the angst and anger come from? Is it because the bond grows and he can't actually do anything about it due to his position in the school and being a Death Eater?

Please continue this. Even if its just for a handful of readers. I'll certainly be checking back with it!

Kind Regards,
Utopia.