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for Fate and a Rose

by CBeta

person ichie-chan(too lazy to sign in)
schedule June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
All right...the beginning of this story doesn\'t make sense and maybe that\'s why you don\'t have many reviews....i guessing that you started this story before on this sight and was just continuing it...or you just wrote the story that way, but this really doesn\'t make any sense.....

ichie-chan
person jake
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story made absolutely no sense whatsoever. at all. it was pretty dman dumb, and shouldnt have even been written. had you at least made a little sense, it could have been good. but it jumoped from scene to scene w/o any explination
person Amessis
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved that ending!
person Amessis
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
To reviewer \"jake\"- maybe you should learn spelling, punctuation and grammer yourself before complaining about other people\'s efforts. Grow up!
person Dawn of a new Day
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very cute chpater. Liked the part where Draco was trying to get Harry to let him see his tattoo. Very funny. I really liek the way you proyray Harry, Draco, and Hermione. Tis nice. Also when it comes to who should be preggers i think it should be Harry. I can just see him prenant then a really protective Draco looking after him.
person Morpheus
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I vote for MPREG!Harry
person Glade
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Real awesome chapter. I loved it and i can't wait ill the next chapter comes out. I think that is should be mprg!harry. Very cute
person Tainted Love
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Definitly Mpreg!Harry. They are always the best.
person Neopet69
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think with Draco's personailty in this story Harry would be the best choice to become pregnat. Mpreg!Harry is so cute.
person GMalfoy
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this story and i have to say it is one of the best ones i have read. I really like the way u describe Harry and Draco's relationship. Very sweet. As for either MPREG!Harry or MPREG!Draco, i think that MPREG!Harry would be really good.

_Gwen_