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for The Noble House of Malfoy

by Kanashii

person Dark Submissive
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Rarely if ever do I make a review, however I find this story so erotic and hot I had to pipe in. You have a true way with words and I love the way you portray the Malfoy's, Fiona and even Lotahr. Very, very, very nicely done. PLEASE continue this, I find myself saving this story and rereading it often! Thanks for the updates and looking for more updates.
person Cassidy Rain
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An exquisite pairing! I'm enjoying this thoroughly!! Keep it up, i can't wait for more!
person Reviewer
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I just read all 10 chapters in one sitting....it really hooked me! So update soon!
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an incredible story. I love how you portray the Malfoys - dangerous, elegant, and powerful. Very well done. I also like Fiona, she's an interesting character. *thumbs up* Keep writing, yo!
person Boris
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love love love love this story. Please give more chapters!! <3
person afici0nada
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow! that last chapter of yours was hot! :P I love the way you write Fiona, with her conflicting emotions. She's such a sweet girl, with something dark hidden inside of her, waiting to be released. She reads Lucius very well, knowing just what he needs, and not being afraid to give it to him.

I really enjoy reading your stories. :) I think there's a real thrill in being completely powerless, letting go of every single bit of control. It started with your mafia stories (which I also really liked!), and I was pleased to discover that you had started a Malfoy fic as well.

Keep up the great work!
person Slytherin Grad
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am really surprised you don't have more reviews on this one. I really enjoy it! The pace and prose of it remind me of a combination of Upstairs/Downstairs, Wuthering Heights and Antoniu's Marketplace series. Really cleverly done I am most curious to see where this goes, and of course it is "De-LUCIUS-ly" hot and sexy! Job well done.
person Enero
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story. It is different from any other story I've read, and I hope that you continue it.
Enero
person Petalsoft
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I just found your story and I have to say it's very good, very sexy. Please do continue on with this.
person Jarno
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, really nice. I do hope you continue this.