rate_review Reviews

Fun start. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with it. :-)

Well the storyline has potential; it\'s intriguing enough to make me want to come back and find out what Harry and Ron\'s great plan is. However, your vow to not post until it\'s ready to post should include spellchecking and proofreading for grammar. The spelling and grammatical errors make me think you are a teenager dabbling in writing and this is your first fanfic. Good potential, just tighten up and keep working on it. I will be back to read more.

The story had potential but all the gramatical errors and missing words made it hard to get through. Don't get me wrong, I liked it. But it'd be nice if you could proofread before posting.

Hot! Hot! Hot! Glad to hear other stories will continue!