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Awwww! that is sooooooooooooooo sweet!!!! *melts* I love it! *hugs*

Love how the relationship is progressing. Not too quick and not to slow. Perfect! *does mild happy dance as is hungover* (lol.....research ;) )

Awww...That was just cute and funny.....Loved both chapters..cant wait to read more

Don't get me wrong I love your fic but, we are dying out here from the teasing!!!!!! Wait... torture is a good thing~Smirk~ nevermind.... ~wanders away laughing, silly me~

I think they more than like each other. Waiting patiently until one of them gets enough nerve to say something about it. Great chapter.

awwwww..total sweetness from our resident snakry professor...i'm really loving the slow subtle way they are falling for each other...
can't wait til they both figure it out and go crashing into the night with each other...

SQUEEE AN UPDATE!!! Thank you. I was hit with inspiration on the way home from the grocery store. Listening to the oldies station the Pickle. An this song came on.


You could do a South of the Border theme night.

COME A LITTLE BIT CLOSER Lyrics
(by Jay And The Americans)

In a little caf

I really like your story

I just discovered your story. It is very well-written and the plot is moving at a nice speed.

So when do we get the Slow Comfortable Screw? (Sloe Gin, Southern Comfort and Orange Juice)?

Woowee! This is a trip. Lovely so far, Elayne. Very excellently done. I like the character progression in this. The whole Harry divorce thing is a nice line. And you have some wonderful one liners in this (besides the one Vamps gave us, I mean.) I would not be lying if i said I am looking forward to more of this story. Snape is very Snape-ish and in character, and Hermione's showing the right amount of desperation in the beginning and progressing into a mature character. That's that for my quick character analysis.

As for the chapter structure, I originally toyed with the idea, but I'm glad I scrapped it for the one I have because that way our stories are quite different. It is indeed interesting to see how we've taken the same original concept and gone in completely separate ways.

Excellent fic so far and I expect great things to come (did that sound too Dumbledore-ish? lol!).

Me Likey! Was so happy to see another chapter posted today. More drink ideas ....

Snake Bite:
* 1 oz. VO, * 3/4 oz. Peppermint schnapps

White Lion:
1 1/2 oz. Light Rum, Juice of 1/2 Lemon, 1/2 tsp. Grenadine, 1 tsp. Powdered Sugar, 2 Dashes Bitters, Blend with ice, Strain to Serve up in a chilled cocktail glass

Kiss In The Dark:
3/4 oz. each; Gin, Cherry Brandy & Dry Vermouth
Shake with ice, Strain into a chilled cocktail glass

and I think you should read this one... http://cocktails.about.com/library/recipes/blwitnogwit.htm (people are insane)
Great Job, I like a slow buildup (tease!) I await the next chapter on baited breath :)