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for Under the Influence

by acciosanity

person Mr. Moosey
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I knew it would be worth the wait...and I believe I know what special part was dedicated to me. Honestly, I almost squeeled out loud when I saw that you mentioned me in your author note. It always makes me feel so special. Keep up the good work. Now that the ice has finally been broken, I take it they won't hold back as much anymore, right?
person larana
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Final down to the lemon-e-goodness! Please post again soon. I need my drinky fix.
person Slave4Severus
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!! So, is 'my dear' Hermione's new pet name?
Got an idea for theme night..its a bit lame, but i would love to see my fave drink one Wednesday night. BLUE MOTORCYCLE!! You could have the place be all decked out like a biker bar from the seventies..or even eighties with some blue light bulbs for lighing.....kinda reminds me of 'the blue oyster' bar..LOL
Anyway, thought the idea was kinda funny.
Happy writing!!!
Slave
person EVIL MJ
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
When I started reading this I thought there is no way I am going to like a story like this. But here I am hooked and waiting for more. Please end the suffering and update soon as I am enjoying this way too much!
person Wile
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can I just say that I love how you had their official date go so horribly! It was very fitting for the story. And it's good to finally see some action out of these two. (Also, a nice little tease at the end of 12 is the perfect way to get your readers to come back for more. It's a technique I've gotten very good at using, especially when I know it may be a little time between updates.) Ooh, and you did have the two of them getting a bit snippy with each other. Drama alert! hehe. Excellent chapters Elayne. I'm excited to see more.
person pickles87
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe you are UNDER THE INFLUENCE! That is just plain mean. I was so happy seeing an update and then you stop... An now my cotton undies are in a bunch. Drink some sober up potion and get your arse back to the keyboard!

I don't know if I should tell hubby about this chapter. MMmmmm . I'll think about it.

It seemed they were getting ready to box it out. Not to sure they will make it to the hotel room in one piece... Waiting for more.

person Kris
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SO CLOSE SO FREAKING CLOSE!!
person Cat
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMGGGGG *explodes* i cant wait for the next chapter i really really cant you are so evil with this long slow build up then you leave us hanging,,,,, Update Please~!!!!!!! BTW amazing fic so far, one drink that my mom us to enjoy was a
Pink Lady
1 Shot Sloe Gin
1 Shot Vodka
2 Shots Cream
fill cup with these and ice, blend and enjoy

not a great idea but that is what my mother loved,,,, oh yeah and try a canadian night, tehehe or perhaps a fantasy night you know fairy wings etc


ohhh please update
person Cat
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMGGGGG *explodes* i cant wait for the next chapter i really really cant you are so evil with this long slow build up then you leave us hanging,,,,, Update Please~!!!!!!! BTW amazing fic so far, one drink that my mom us to enjoy was a
Pink Lady
1 Shot Sloe Gin
1 Shot Vodka
2 Shots Cream
fill cup with these and ice, blend and enjoy

not a great idea but that is what my mother loved,,,, oh yeah and try a canadian night, tehehe or perhaps a fantasy night you know fairy wings etc


ohhh please update
person nesscafe
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Been a long time since i found anything this yummy to read. Too bad about not having anywhere for the love birds to go. Hope you'll be updating soon though!