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for Under the Influence

by acciosanity

person Vampire_Exotica
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG soooooooooooooooooo HOT!!!


SO FREAKING HOT!!!!!


*drooling*


lol and I couldn't stop laughing at the pants explosion lol.


person ccrawley
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just a thought. Maybe the recipe for each drink in the chapter at the beginning, so if wanted we could try the drink as reading. Like the way you have taken this challenge and gone with it. Nice variety of things in each chapter.
person snapeluva
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
For a first fanfic, this is really good!! It's HOT and hilarious!!! I'm a meteorology major and I loved the crack " the forecast for tonight will be cloudy with a chance of panties." Too funny!!!
person Signora Snape
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
At first I wasn't sure about this story, but after I read a few chapters the idea of them as drinking buddies is hysterical. The umbrellas in their drinks, licking the salt off, her throwing up on his shoes. Now things getting interesting-I really like it. Good job.
person Barbie
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heheh! In the bar, it was Sprite but in your recipe it was 7-Up. Are you getting royalties from both Coke and Pepsi? Please write more soon!
person sheedy
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure what was in it but I once had a drink calleda slippery nipple. I know it was hot and had rum, frangelico,and amaretto. Maybe coffee. Theme night Goth, Punk, ~shudders~Disco ~sudders again~ , Of course St. Patrics Day, Valentines(might be a good way for Sev to make it up to Herms) Fetish night is always fun. Keep up the great work.
person Barbie
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I forgot. If Hermione gets mad at Snape again and decides to abstain... she could buy him a 'Blue Balls' which is Malibu, Blue Curacao with a twist of lemon!!
person hezzie
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have no drink suggestions, but i would like to say that of all the snape/hermionie fics i'm following right now, this is by far my favorite :) Keep up the brilliant work and UPDATE SOON!
person Wile
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Elayne, you almost had me in tears from laughter at the thought of the panty shower. Excellent imagery. And Snape being a bastard was perfect. Hermione's got to be angry sometime and it's not a good HG/SS story if they don't have conflicts sometimes. Hilarious chapters with just the right amount of conflict. Excellently done!
person Geri
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lots of fun to read this one, and I am enjoying HOW you are weaving in the required lines for the challange! I think I have learned more about mixed drinks from reading the first 5 chapters then I ever thought possible! Are you a bartender in the non magical world? I look forward to reading more!