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for Under the Influence

by acciosanity

person Ithilin Palandiriel
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmmm . . . Hermione going to get an ear full? But I think she's going to have to get him pretty drunk for this to get much further. hehehehehehehe.

Ithilin
person JTBJAB
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Are you kidding me? Absinthe is pretty much illegal in the UK... although some how it isn't.... anyway, my point is... if you buy it in a bar, you are only allowed one shot... 4 shots is said to be a lethal dose, hence the practically illegal status it holds!

Still... interesting story...
person Anon
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice work! I love the fact that she admits divorce has made her rich, and that she's so laid-back with Snape. The inclusion of the absinthe was fantastic, and it's a shame that that stuff is no longer hallucinogenic just for the sake of fanfics (can't say the same for society though). Can't wait to see more action going on between the two of them, and thanks for making the formatting 10 times better! Truthfully the formatting in the first chapter didn't actually take away from the chapter itself, but was just a tad annoying to scroll through. Anyway, thanks for the amazingly quick update and for the hilarity of their situation. Can't wait to read more. Peace!
person mekareami
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad if this is a first chapter... though the formatting is abysmal and I had to paste it into wordpad to read without scrolling
person cupotrevor
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i would have loved to have read your story but the way it's formatted i would have had to scroll across the page for every line..is there some way it can be adjusted so it fits within a single unscrolled across page??
person Vampire_Exotica
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!!!!!! This is goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood!!!

Can't wait for the next update! Keep up the good work! You should share more of it as you write wonderfully!

So glad you are taking on my challenge!


*massive hugs*
person Anon
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's pretty good. I'd like to read more.
person Karen
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, I like! Your version of Severus's thought process is great--not too angsty, wiseguy, or slimy. Love that Hermione can apparate competently drunk.