rate_review Reviews

This story has possibilities but quite honestly your grammar and spelling are SO bad that I couldn't read it. I would highly recommend that you get a beta reader, as a beta can really help with these types of issues. Until you do, your audience is likely to be a bit limited. I apologize if this seems harsh, but if you were turning this in for a grade...it wouldn't be so good.

Hmm, some problems with grammar and dialogue. But, it is a good start and I do like how you've set up the story. Keep going and have fun with it. I enjoyed the read!

Hey! This is a good one. I like it a lot. You should continue! Update please