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for Goodnight Sweet Girl

by CassBlake

person cyn
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh yay, i left the last review and came back to find some more...either I missed it earlier or my puppy dog eyes worked. I just finished chapter 2 and it is still awesome. two small things...Draco's birthday is June 5th and in their 7th year they would be 17 not actually 18. i'm sorry, but both of those jumped out at me as i read and just wanted to share.

*hands over chocolate chip cookie before reading chapt 3*
person cyn
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooops, nevermind about the birthday comment...just went back and reread first chapter. don't know why i was thinking it was his birthday. *hides behind rock*
person ShaadowyThunder
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Next chapter!!! awsome story

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person L.S
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it. please update..
person cyn
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
can i beg and plead for more now?? I was a very good girl...read all five chapters and loved it...

I couldn't wait for this moment to happen, draco getting his first period! I can't wait for him to complain in front of the boys...somehow I just see him doing that. so funny!