rate_review Reviews

I haven't read a fic like this in so long- please update often, and keep up the good work!

Oh my! Poor Harry! This is great.. wish the chapters were longer though.

I find this story captivating. I love the premise you are using, please continue.

more.now.please.

Great story so far. Update again soon please.

godd keep it up

great chapter!

I cannot believe this is the first time you have written fanfiction. This first chapter is absolutely incredible. I also cannot believe you do not have a beta as I am used to muddling thru on this site, some of the fics here really need a beta. Even your punctuation is excellent! There is another site http://www.cipher-wotr.com/fanfiction/index.php that you might be interested in posting this fiction on because the members are really fabulous about helping other writers achieve thier potential. One of the writers there has even "retired" from fanfic to persue publication. And you have a lot of natural talent and potential. They do, however, require a beta, so although I haven't betaed before I would for you if you needed me to. I believe you are gonna produce a lot of awesome work.

This is a very enjoyable story and I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work and please update soon.

Ohhh no, Poor Harry!! Severus need to rescue him right now. *pout* Please update soon!!