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It's romantic and sad, but there is a good hope for happiness. I much enjoy reading your story.

*lip quivers* So... sweet... I can't wait to see how you make them get together. A distrssed and in love Severus is so adorable. ^_^

Thanks for updating; I really love this story and I wonder how the wizarding world is going to react to Harry's return (I imagine not too well), lol. Keep up the very good work.

I am absolutely loving this. You mentioned being worried about getting feedback earlier. As a first time writer I am amazed at how well you are doing with reviews. Readers have a tendency to "follow" their favorite writers and may not discover new talent immediately. I don't think you have anything to worry about. But please do not be like so many writers here. Start a story, it is wonderful, then abandon it. It upsets me so to get hooked on a story I really like, only for it to end abruptly. Then I check and find out it hasn't been updated since early 2004. And there are so many first chapters on this site that never made it to chapter two. So don't give up on your story.

I really like this so far. Please continue because I'm really looking forward to more.

This story is great and as horrible as it is, I can imagine the wizarding world doing that to Harry at the end of J.K. Rowling's 7th book.
So when will Harry relize he loves the potions master as well or are you going to have Severus "woo" him?

this is very promising, you MUST carry on.

great update keep it up

This moves things forward! Looking forward to when you can update again! I want read Harry's reaction.

Nice start, I like it very much and I hope you do go on but also I hope you don't rush it, the thing between them I mean. I actually do not mind that these chapters didn't have more detail than that. Relationships, romantic and others, are usually that which keeps me reading a fic, so it was quite enough for me what you did write. Of course, assuming that you do continue to explain some things to us, ie Ron, Herm, etc, etc. Very good start anyway, thanks and can't wait for more!