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by mastersaltlicky

person Woah
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Um.. Well that was.. Er.. Interesting.. Kind of.. Okay, here we go, down to the point. It stunk. Not only was there NO plotline, Harry with Neville at the end?! What about H/Hr buddy? O_______o;; I'm sure you could do a MUCH better job. You were jsut trying to be funneh, when well.. you wern't xP Sorry for being harsh, I'm just honest ^^;

Fin. <3
person THX1138
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a shit. Please delete this crap. I really don't know, why so many shitty H/HR storys are posted on this side. I really beg you. Stop writing. You have no talent. And please ... delete this peace of shit.
person Anon
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That was just ... horrible.
person :-)
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THX1138 has really nice grammar and spelling.
person Lauren
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MMMM. I need more. MORE, I SAY!
person sexy boi69696969
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that wuz so dam hot