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for The Ring (Edit, not Update)

by Ms_Figg

person mary
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is good! What happened to Vivaldi and sister? And is there going to be another story soon?
person akathryna
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
person Given2Fly
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant!
person JTBJAB
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love lil' Severus... he's so evil, in a kid sort of way! I mean I love all the triplets, but still... lol! Brilliant and well done!
person LillaQ
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved the triplets. Couldn
person Edania
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now I have to say he is a sneaky devil that he is.. Oh the wonderful lemons!
person Ithilin Palandiriel
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wanna know what sort of incantation that was. Was it contraseptive or productive? Gods where is a man when you need him!?!?! I need a VERY COLD shower now. YAY *does happy dance*

Ithilin
person MrsStrawberry
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch25-27....Phew**fans oneself**....Scorchio!Glad that Dumbley and Minerva are pleased to see him back.....as unhappy the students maybe lol! I just know that you're gonna enjoy writing the next few chapters ALMOST as much as we are in reading them!!!!Update.....please! Now must go and have that cold shower..........?
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good...I always love ur stories and this is another hit!!!!

It was soo exciting and funny,and erotic with a little romance in between....i hope to read more from u soon
person Faye
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

I absolutely love your story! And everytime I checked, there was a new chapter! Yay!! You really are a fast updater oO *admires it jealously* It was kinda weird, that Hermione still called him "Professor" for such a long time...but I didn't mind it at all...maybe they're up to roleplay? ^_~
Normally I'm not into lemons and these sorts of FF's, but there are a few exceptions..."The Ring" is one of it! It's not all about sex...well...what I wanted to say is, that there is actually a story-line ;D

The idea of Severus turning into Snow White made me laugh...I know you didn't actually wrote that, but I imagined him in a white gown with a halo around him and "Halleluja"-Shouts in the air, as Hermione kissed him. And Halleluja I screamed, when they were finally in his bed-chambers xD
If they are going to marry - and I know they will! ;D - could you let them invite Petra and Peter? Pleaaaase? I adore this little guy...he could carry the rings to them at the ceremony(? How I hate that word and me, not able to spell it right -.-)

My fav. part is, when Dumbledore flooed McGonagall..."I'm not in the mood..." Hell, they have a sex-life xD That's so...odd, like picturing your own parents having sex...oh my, I better stop imaginaring xD

Okay, this is it for now! I hope you will update as soon as you're used to!
GreetZ from Germany
~Faye

P.S.: Please forgive me! I'm not good at writing english that well...my grammar is horrible @_@