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for The Ring (Edit, not Update)

by Ms_Figg

person JW
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 1 - wait, she lost her wand! Hmm, will she wait for him, see if he needs help? You're amazing, churning out these story ideas and chapters so quickly! As for your dial-up connection - hey, who's going to phone you after midnight? Besides, you can write offline, and just paste in the text when you're online. I'm glad it wasn't a more serious problem.
person droxy
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
every first chapter you write is exciting and suspenseful. but she needs her wand!
person firewall
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 1 - Once again you've come up with a new and different idea. I wonder where you will go with this story. Once again your brilliance shines through Ms Figg.
person Pam
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great post, I'm hooked, please post again soon. Thanks.
person Steph
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great fic. Please keep it coming. I love the part with snape giving hermione the ring. Its great!
Thank for a great story
person firewall
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 2 - Ah the plot thickens. The new Snape siblings are interesting additions to your story. I must admit I loved/hated other new characters you included in other stories. Poor Hermione may be challenged greatly on this adventure. At least she isn't too closely attached to Severus that she feels his apparent death strongly. She seems saddened but not devastated. I like adventure, etc. so let the games begin. We'll appreciate the lemons when they finally come all the more. hahaha
person droxy
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the raven, glad to see him back.

I am sure you can write a lovely engaging story w/o smut. Won't stop me from reading it. I like mystery suspense fics.
person Edania
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh god noooooo! he can't be dead Noooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Noooooooooooooooo! says its not so...what happen to him..where he is her Answers i need update please i beg of you for the love of god ! lol

*coughs* Any very cool chapter i love what you have going on. I mean you got me edge finding out happens. I hope at some point we see snape..a ghost of him or something , dream maybe or something. So many questions about the ring too, what does it do..what powers? I can see this into a good story alot that must be answered . I do hope we see the raven in there..will he get hexed? so many questions so little pre-chapter. *sighs*
person Mayken
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Would love to step in to your mind and have a poke around, all those ideas you've been having lately.
Woke up this morning wondering if I'd hae my Figg Fix today, and I have Wheee :)

ARGGHH Dial up.. *pokes with stick*

person fjd_88
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow!!! this sounds like it is going to be an awesome story. keep up the great writing!