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for The Ring (Edit, not Update)

by Ms_Figg

person Marie Verlaine
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice start!! it promises a lot! I just hope you keep having this things popping in you mind!!! update soon, please!!
kisses!
person daygonna
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wonderful! i cant wait for an update, im never disappointed with ur storied and i look forward to reading this one more.
person LillaQ
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now this is an intersting start! What will he do if he survives? He kind of blew his icy cover there...ANd what about her wand? I must reread that part.
person Laura
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning- loved the tension and his heroic rescue of Hermione. I sure hope you're able to remain connected! I know that if you were publishing your stories in book form- I'd be buying them. Do you have a Paypal acct? Maybe those of us who wished to do so could make a contribution towards your phone bill...I couldn't afford a lot, but I'd help! I don't want to lose my favorite author.

As usual, I'm greedily looking forward to more of this latest story and hoping things work out so you can stay online.

Laura
person Ailo
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you've definitely got me hooked to this one Ms. Figg, that was a stunning opening chapter. I'm going to take a wild stab and say that even if Severus expects to die, he'll make it back to our very own Miss Granger somewhow. Can't wait to see what will happen when they meet again!

~Ailo
person Velvetina
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I love all of your work and figured it was about time to come out of the woodwork and review your fics.

I think the premise of this fic sounds great and I am very intrigued to find out where its gonna go. How will Hermione react to Snape when he comes back? What sort of condition will our beloved potions master be in? Will he regret kissing her?? Eeek so many questions and I am just gonna have to be patient.
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is quite a change for the introductory chapter, but very good none-the-less. I have read your other stories, and while they have a bit more of a playful edge to them, they are still brilliant and I consider you my favorite author for Severus/Hermione stories, if not, HP fanfics in genral. I like the darker twist that you threw into this one, and I'm excited to see how it's going to turn out. ^-^

*~*~* Alexiel Almasy *~*~*
person JTBJAB
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH NO... don't punish us all because of one person!!! *Sobs on bended knee* Oh gods no!!!

*Clears throat* Well done on this chapter, and I am definitely liking this so far... so I am keeping my fingers crossed that you can stay on the net/online!
person Applekissis
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Noooo..no cliffies please fopr the love of eveything sweet and nice............lol
Only the first chapter and already its amazing..It pulled me in from the begining,and I cant wait to read more.
hope everything works out for u and all.
person LillaQ
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I like action - of all kind... I