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for The Ring (Edit, not Update)

by Ms_Figg

person chatty
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh no, i dont have a good feeling about hermione going around telling about her secrets like her translator charm. so where is she anyway? in some other planet or something? and damn, she was overheard and she doesnt have her wand but she can still apparate right? wonder what happens if she doesnt close the shades. lol. this story is so exciting. waiting for the next chapter.
person JTBJAB
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe... loved it! Voldemort finally learning true fear!!! And poor Severus though - grounded... but can't do anything himself... I bet you have something planned though... I look forward to your next update!!!
person Denise
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chp 7-8: I am soo happy!! the story is coming along great, and all of my favorite stories updated today AND i found out i am pregnant!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!! (sorry....couldnt contain my joy!!!). well back to your story. i like the new chapters.....a lot of things seem to be going on now. I cant wait to see what hermione sees in the mountain....and what happens with snape......i wonder what he thinks of hermiones journey so far. Well, please update soon.

***BTW: did you know, today (January 9th) is snapes birthday (J.K. Rowling posted it on her site....). well, thought u might want to know.
person Edania
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay..more questions are kinda poping up ..lol Snape left why?..so much more to answer but all good time..Just one more..what the heck did snape got herm into? I hope she does job well..still some questions on the ring itselfand the real reason why herm..so many questions..man this story got some thrills..can't wait!
person Velvetina
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh I am so intrigued!!! Where is she and will she go up the mountain? Well I'm kinda guessing she will and she will return and break whatever cursey type mean thing that the snape family have put on the mountain...well thats my prediction anyway lol.

I love that raven, he is soo cool!
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter(s)
Its really shaping up now.
person Obsidian_Hair
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The other fire-being wouldn't be named Fred, would it?!?! Lol, if it is, great idea though, to have those two collecting the bad boys... Like the story, especially Hermione talking to the ring.... hehehehehe
person Edania
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh man snape's family are just damn...wrong! mean..can't find the words...Boo them lol. I hope the ring will protect her..so much questions..where does snape really come from? Oh Miss_Figg you out did yourself with this..ohhhh can't wait.
person AnyuBoo
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just started reading this story today and couldn't stop till I'd read through all 7 chapters; and I'm definitely wishing there were more to read. This has started off very, very well. I'll definitely be reading on when new chapters are posted, this story is very promising.
person Ithilin Palandiriel
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ARGH!!!!!!! You and your evil cliffies. *sighs knowingly* Though I've been accused of that myself. Need I say it? MORE!!!!!!!!! *checks watch* have you updated yet?

I really like this turn that you have taken. It's dark and mysterious, full of forboding. *checks watch again* Please hurry!!!!

Ithilin