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for The Ring (Edit, not Update)

by Ms_Figg

schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very intresting chapter..
person JW
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 7 - poor Raucous, goes from eating bacon to being TRADED for bacon! Nope, he's too valuable. I wonder if he can fly over the Snape home and find it, then tell Hermione. Sounds dangerous.... Hermione should find the boy's mama and get the facts. Thanks for updating!
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm. Interesting. What has Hermione gotten herself into? I can't wait to read more. Update again and soon.

Your biggest fan,
Tiffany
person alitheia
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is quite intriguing and would love to see where you go with it. I read about your
financial troubles and I'm very sorry. You are very talented with your writing and hope that
you can find some compensation for it somehow.

Alitheia P.
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What's going to happen next? I can't wait to find out! Update again and soon!

Your biggest fan,
Tiffany
person chatty
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love the mystery and suspense in this story. it is just soo cool and this story is very different from all your others. If hermione keeps blurting at this rate, she might end up letting the bad guys (venoma and that sister) know about her mission. o_o
person Gin
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Something I don't understand about Snape's history. 1- Was Sev born on Mu? Did he live here as a child? 2 - If so, how did he receive a Hogwarts' letter if Mu is in a parallel universe-type-thingy?
person Ms_Figg
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gin: I haven't gotten to where Snape was born, this is his ancestral home, where his people come from.
person Megan
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You continue to surprise and impress. This is so much fun! Now we get an adventure that will (I assume) culminate in Severus and Hermione lemons. Of course, if you wanted to dally with Severus' cousin... he sounded pretty sexy :)
person Megan
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You continue to surprise and impress. This is so much fun! Now we get an adventure that will (I assume) culminate in Severus and Hermione lemons. Of course, if you wanted to dally with Severus' cousin... he sounded pretty sexy :)