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for The Ring (Edit, not Update)

by Ms_Figg

person Bree
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay so the unicorns might be friendly b/c she is pure??? Maybe??? Anyways I cannot wait to find out:) This story is excellent! Please update again soon!!!
person Edania
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love that raven, he is so cute lol reminds of me snape. lol I love chapter 13, got a few moments and it does tell a little more on the ring..And snape was watching herm, bad man lol. Great chapter
person LemonLover
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice touches added, as always ;).
person chatty
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
snape is so hot even when he is half dead.. lol. so are they going to end up having sex in dreams? what is in that box? if she gives that box to the ancestral home, will he come back? *tension tension* im waiting for the next chapter paaatiently. lol.
person K
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooooh, yummeee snapey goodness, can't wait for more.
person Laura
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, MsFigg, this is a really engrossing story! I must admit that, at the beginning, I was a bit put off that it was going in a new direction with new characters. Thankfully, I kept reading because this is turning out to be fabulous! The new characters are so well written I can see them already. Great characterization.
I think Raucous is going to end up very protective of Hermione. I hope we don't have to wait too long for Severus' return, though! (I'm sure that no matter how long it takes, the lemons will be well worth the wait! lol!)

Loving this one!
Laura
person Ms_Figg
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Alyessa: Yes. Orb did have a snake ring. It was a demon named Sning, and would answer yes and no questions by squeezing her finger, and it could slide off her hand and go places. I don't remember if it bit or not though. I chose a snake ring for Snape because he is a Slytherin primarily, though I worked it into his family history. His ring has other cool properties that will show up when Hermione's on the mountain. Cool beans though. I need to pick that book up again :)
person JTBJAB
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... amazing, amazing, amazing! Well done... and I look forward ot finding out what they talk about!
person Edania
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now that about explains all my questions..just one more...what next? And what is thing she has to do... something to do with his ashes ..so many more questions.

person JW
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 14 - yay, Raucous! You're just as smart - or smarter - than that Big Bird! Very glad Hermione can now receive Raucous' messages. She's still a virgin, so those unicorns should be okay with her - but Big Bird's mistress won't like seeing it. Hmm, and Big Bird recently ate a unicorn foal... maybe the unicorns can skewer Big Bird! Roast Big Bird for dinner!!