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ch 17 : I'm glad to know you managed to upload your story in spite of life ! It doesn't matter if the updates are slower as long as you go on writing. I liked the "don't ever call me coward" line, rang a bell...

This is a half gal. of ice cream good! Please keep me updated.

Ch 17 - Terrific chapter. The power shift to the half-brother is significant and also helps underline the typical Snape character. Good thing Sevvie isn't so ruthless...lol, yeah right! Truthfully, I don't mind missing those lemons, Ms Figg. Not quite my cuppa. Now does this ring activate against natural enemies or only magical ones. Will Hermione have to dig into her bag of resourceful tricks to survive the wolves. Hmmm.

Now to another point. Ms Figg, thank you. Thank you for going to a friend's to upload this chapter and thank you to your friend for letting you use the computer. You have spoiled us all with your fast and timely updates and you are giving us so much more than expected by going out of your way to post to us. We will read whatever and whenever you post and be very grateful for that opportunity. Thank you so much for your wonderful stories.

I am offline after today myself because I am moving. I am not looking forward to it. I, however, do have an end in sight. I will be back online on the 23rd. I'm so sorry you are having trouble. I can identify with that from past experiences.

Great chapter! Vemona was blindsided by her brother. If it wasn't squicky I would think it was hilarious! And the wolves. I wonder what will happen to them? I can't wait for your next update. *cries loudly* I won't be able to check again until the 23rd! Good luck with your phone.

Ms_Figg, i love u soo much! only u will go all the way to ur friend to update a new chapter for us. *showerskisses* i hope u get back ur internet back soon. :)

now coming back to the story, raucous is one bird isnt he? lol. he not only flew for his life a moment ago, but he comes back and shows images of himself killing that hawk. i laughed like hell for that, that was soo funny!!!

i guess the whole snape family has the thing about the 'coward' comment. and vivaldi really seems to be hot although his tastes are a bit 'Eew', and the hand twisting part reminded me about sev. oh god, im missing severus lemons already. and vivaldi sounded like severus when he got angry... now where the hell did THAT come from! Ms_Figg, get severus back on stage, im going nuts here now. lol.

and Ms_Figg, i agree with u about the incest part.
e.g: in Egyptian royal families some kings had sex with their sister in order to remain the head of his house and also to produce a son who would become king.

Please send some of your other writings to publishers, or change this one to involve all fictional characters. You'll definitely be successful.

We're so lucky that you're dedicated enough to try to finish your story ms figg. Hope you get your phone line back soon so you don't have to make the extra trips though.Can't wait to read your next chapter!

We allappreciate the efforts you through to provide us entertainment. Thank you!

Lovely chapter and a nice bit os SS/HG.

Will be looking forward to your updates! ;)

love the story, will be patient for the next update.