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for The Ring (Edit, not Update)

by Ms_Figg

person JW
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 18 - thanks for Shaaron's escape! Maybe her virgin status will help with unicorns too. Too bad Severus didn't explain to Hermione about her needing her virginity for survival on the mountain. Hmm, maybe the hungry wolves would like a Vivaldi-Venoma snack, or Big Bird.... And she should tell Severus about her idea of "land of light" involving pink cupids and fluffy clouds - he'd agree he wouldn't like it! Thank you for updating; I'm sorry it's such a hassle for now. Drat phone company!
person Applekissis
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter..
person Elena
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I hope you update soon.
person mysticsong
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous, as always! Can't wait to see what happens next!
person JTBJAB
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! I look forward to the next chapter! The dedication you described when trying to upload this.. is amazing - damn library! Lol! Well... I guess, at least you got some sleep out of it... bless ya!

Well done on the chapter, and thanks for the lemons! Lol!
person Ithilin Palandiriel
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAARRRRRGH!!!!!!!!!!! You HAD to stop it there, didn't you?! BAD EVIL CLIFFIE!!!!!!! I know computer access is preventing quicker updates but HURRY!!!!!!!!!!!


Ithilin
person Ladytalon
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As a card-carrying member of the Arabella Figg Appreciation Society, I would just like to say that it totally sucks to have you offline. Seriously, if you need any assistance at all, we'd be glad to help. The story is going great, and how about that Raucous? I love it when you throw that bird into the mix, he's something else. Severus is certainly looking his fill of her, which makes me laugh at the general horniness of men - Hermione needs to take him to task for being a Peeping Tom!
person K
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwww poor Raucous. Mean bird hurting peoples. Update soon.
person firewall
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 19 - Venoma became a slave of her own passions I see. Tisk, tisk. I thought she had more gumption than that. Good thing Severus didn't have to depend on her. Boy that Vivaldi is a piece of work. Talk about letting others do your dirty work.

This is really exciting. I hope you are able to post soon so we can find out. You are doing a wonderful job posting once a day. Thank you.
person pam
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh...I love this story. Sorry I haven't replied, started work this week, and have been busy, but now I'm all caught up. Great posting, please post again soon. Thanks.