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for The Ring (Edit, not Update)

by Ms_Figg

person Lils
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome ending!!! And the ending scene was pretty awesome.
person smmz79
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like the first chap here in battle hermione trying to survive and then severus swoops in at the right time to save her.... i like that he is the one to initiate his feelings usually it is hermione although he thinks he is about to die but still....
person smmz79
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohh this is interesting.... his cousins are going to be very interesting... i am definitely looking forward to reading this story i think i started it but never got to finish i seem to remember the will from severus.... oh my i laughed so hard when you mentioned raucous and is 'birdy conniptions' that was great
person smmz79
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i just loved voldies temper tantrum in limbo that was funny and i really like their dialogue.... yeah snape can watch his 'loved ones'
person smmz79
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmm.. this sounds like an interesting little village and i wonder why hermione should close her shades.... could have something to do with the snapes???
person Lils
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that sound slightly ominous...
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed that alot. It was like reading a fairy tale at the beginning. Then the end was really special with the Slytherins in training outsmarting Hermione. Good job.
person Dragons Quill
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really really liked your story, it had so much depth and a good plot. but i can't help but wonder how many pieces the triplets will be in if/when hermione finds out how her daughter came about.
person Anon
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person tina
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING story. What more can we expect from you. Your and amazing writer and hope you write more. I love this stoy.

MRSSNAPEHERM