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for The Ring (Edit, not Update)

by Ms_Figg

schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see Albus's reaction to having Severus back! Please update again and soon!

Your biggest fan,
Tiffany
person K
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hot damn it's about time...i can't wait.
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome updates! I loved how you got rid of the Potion Mistress! It rocked! I can't wait for the lemons! LEMONS! LEMONS! LEMONS! Update again and soon!

Your biggest fan,
Tiffany
person Anon
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3



OK, the whole chapter is great; Voldemort dies and is most satisfyingly betrayed by our man. Your author
person Snapelover11
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fuggy...you know I love you right? But seriously...where the hell are the lemons????!!! You have never made us wait so long, dragging things out? WHy must you do this? Can't you see that you hold the key to all of our wonton, voyeristic desires? You are a mean tease Figgy!
*crosses arms and looks away*
I will not review agian....until I read some lemons...even a little one.

mmmuuuhhahahahahaha!
person Ms_Figg
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CathMorgan: Wow, girl, that's ambitious. A review chapter by chapter? Heck, that's enough writing for an entire story in itself. lol. As much as I appreciate it, it sounds too much like homework for you. There's nothing wrong with a reader just steeping in a story in my opinion. You can steep all you want :) Next chapter is up in a minute.
person kari
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am loving your story still. Are you winding down or are you going to continue this story through several more chapters? Is there going to be a sequel. Can't wait for the next chapter. I am so glad that you are able to update frequently due to your loss of inet. Keep up the good work.
person Obsidian_Hair
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is it just me, or have the chapters gotten longer since your connection went down?! Mind you, I'm not complaining!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I still don't really get it tough... Ok, Snape just about knew that he was going to die when he killed Voldemort, beforehand he gave Hermine the ring, but it wouldn't have protected her, if she wasn't to become a Snape someday... So, how did he know, that she was even interested?! Would he have acted on the feelings even though with Voldemort alive? I'm feeling rather thick right now... sorry about that!! And I hope that he'll show the sub-teacher some of his teaching methods, and rather quick please, the tension between Hermione and Snape is almost tangible on the monitor.... =)
person Julie
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, great Cliffie!!! Love it, love it, love it!!! I love how you wrapped it up on Mu. I can't wait for Albus's reaction, it's gonna be good!!
person Anon
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4



I like the glowing torch and pulsing ring; sort of like Myst with cheats. Also, the ever vaunted private library; readers the world over can lust over that image any day. Hermione lying in Snape