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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11 favorite minor line:
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OK You're not evil, you're BLOODY BRILLIANT!
About the chapter........SMOKING!
About the phone..........WHOOPEE!
Welcome back baby.
Toodles.
About the chapter........SMOKING!
About the phone..........WHOOPEE!
Welcome back baby.
Toodles.
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12: The attraction is great and I like the backstory about Snape
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful story. As always, your work is amazing.
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 13-22. The entire adventure up the mountain and to the tomb is well done. I like Raucous
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
must not read before work!! excellent chapter, I can't wait!
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My favorite minor line from Chapter 18: 'She smelled of smoke and mountain air. Like a nymph who had walked through fire.' In general, your stories are so well done that I just roll along enjoying them, so I tend to comment on the little extra touches you throw in.
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, can you just imagine those three and Raucous! It would be too funny.
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww...I loved this story, heck...I love all your storys....looking forward to reading more in the very near future....hopefully..Thanks.
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 21 is another cinematic chapter full of really great visuals. Interesting decision to make the resurrection painful; I believe every word, of course, because you