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Love your writing, as always!

I LMAO'd that last part. Those slytherin boys sure are sly aren't they?

Cosmyk

I haven't read this before, this one was very cute, I love how the boys gave their mom the postion so that they could have a sister. AND how severus jsut walked away confidtley and proudly after warning the boys not to tell thier mother until they are older. That sounds like what his kids would do....perfect ending.

Hello, another really good story, that I read a long time ago, and then revisited today. You're one of my favourite writers, though your Americanisms do sound very odd when spoken by essentially English characters - especially your use of 'Damn' and such like. British profanity is so different :) But still I digress ... I'd love it if you would deem to write something about the three younger Snape boys - that would be quite interesting. Thank you for sharing your wonderful imagination and talent.

I really liked the first and the last chapters the most!
Great job!
I can't wait until you finish "Through The Looking Glass," -- although I do hope there is some romance thrown into it too!

Oooooookay! This was a fantastically structured story with a delightful storyline. My only complaint is that it seems so Mary Sue-ish. Forgive me my opinions, but I always try to write an honest and critical review. Aside from that one negative observation, I truly did love the story. Thank you for a very interesting fic. I was captivated, and always looked forward to continuing to read it. Kudos!

Phoenix: lol. I have to agree with you. Hermione shines in this one, she faces every obstacle, climbs tall mountains in a single bound, faces down ravening wolves, unicorns and a horde of wizards and comes out smelling like a rose, magically clean without her hair even mussed. lolol. Yeah, no doubt the Sue-ness was in effect, but I couldn't bring myself to let anything happen to her really but close calls. This was one of those indulgence stories, but a lot of fun to write anyway.

Just re-read this story; it is as delightful as the first time. :)

Great work! :D I loved it.

I was pleasantly surprised by the depth of emotion you displayed in the telling of this tale. This reads like a true piece of work and i have only said that once or twice before....I am currently read upwards of 190 stories, all Harry Potter fanfiction...mind you. I am pleased to say, that while Hermione/Severus isn't one of my favorite pairings, I can honestly say that your tale is among my Favorite stories of All Fanfiction. I have been reading for quite sometime now, and I am glad to find yet another Author with whom i find an amazing skill. I thank you from the bottom of my smut-loving soul.....

I Solemnly Swear I Am Up to No Good...


Mischief Managed....

~Sophie Max-Anderson..... A.K.A Lady Sophitia Granger-Malfoy.....Sole Heiress to Lucius and Hermione Malfoy.....or Lady Sophia Lupin-Black.......Wife of Sirius and Remus Lupin-Black.....

Well....May your quill stay sharp....(had to add a bit of Laugh material...sorry.....lol...)