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by LadyYeinKhan

schedule October 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Like your new story :) reads interesting and well so far. You were asking for story name sugestions, so my title idea is 'Reasons' as in Reasons for Being. I'm assuming that this is a marauders how they became a group fic so thats the idea behind my sugestion.
Have a nice day = })
person Isake
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is EXCELLENT! Please continue!
I actually can't think of a title, seeing as I dont come up with titles until I'm a few chapters into my stories...
Good Luck and Happy Writing!
person Lizney
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love that! I love it so much! Over-looking a few gramatical and ligistical errors, it\'s quite well-written and I love the cliff hanger at the end. Very nice! I can\'t wait to read more of it.

I think a good name would be \"Their Smiles.\" but that\'s only after reading the first chapter. I\'m a sucker for taking lines out of the text to make titles, it\'s always been my thing.
person Charlie
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my. That was simply beautiful; I loved it! I can't wait for more!
person orient
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
a little confusing but good. keep going. see if you can make it make sense!