rate_review Reviews

I hope you have horus have kids in the future with his girls because I really like stories where harry has kids. can't wait for more

Its fantastic that you can post chapters at such a fast speed(with quality and quantity). This was another great chapter.. but i was wondering what ever happened to bellatrix. you set up so nice the other chapter. im looking forward to the next update very much.

No offense, but could you change your lemon scenes. I know you\'re trying to have Horus have sex a lot, but really, you\'re just repeating other lemon scenes again in your \'long\' scenes. You have a few creative ones, I admit, but only when he\'s with one person. When he\'s with a group, you always have the same scenes going on. Could you change that? Either that, or don\'t put any more group ones, they\'re getting.....annoying, as it brings down the quality of the story itself if you have a scene that just gets repetitive after a while.

eh...hmm on second thought, not sure about the repeated gang bangs, which is substanceless compared with the first couple of lemons...

Holy Shit!!! As a fellow Harry smut writer in our small community, let me congratulate you on this wonderful piece. I'm very glad you let your plot bunny out. Normally I go for stories with more substance, and with a bit less surrealism. I mean you got absolutely wacko list of tv series+anime xovers... but screw it, the sex scenes pretty much rock ass especially given how you take the time to build things up!!! Keep it up my friend!

"In some ways it was a shame she did not have a daughter to offer her Master. A son to serve would have to do." If I ever do anything with that quote in my story, it's all your fault!!! :P

update tommorow, please. I love this fiction.

update tommorow, please. I love this fiction.

update tommorow, please. I love this fiction.

update tommorow, please. I love this fiction.

update tommorow, please. I love this fiction.