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for Last Dance

by intothenightxx

person cowgirl
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Poor Hermione! I Haven't Cried In 5 Years And This Story Made Me Cry!
person wormey
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn you!! i cried!!!! :(( cow..

it's really good, spanky. love it!
person chris
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is so good, but the ending is so sad.
person Avari20
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this. I wasn't sure about it at first, but toward the end I was completely enthralled. I was hoping that Draco and Hermione would make a run for it to Dumbledore and if I'd been writing it I would have, but then it'd be more than a one-shot and we all know it's up to the author what happens :). It was very emtional in the end, and I was really sad when Draco died. It was pretty great for such a relatively short piece, and I thought I'd let you know that I thought you did a good job!
person Stacy
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good fic! That was so sad!
person Legomygrego19
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wasn't sad, just disappointing. Good grammer though.
person Karen
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Needs some fleshing out and your own twist to make it different from all the other Hermione/Draco stories out there. Grammar, structure, etc. is fine.
person gothic_samurai93
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i almost cried too i was listening to "In the End" by Linkin Park and the melody is sad and a sad story it made me wanna cry. what can i say im a hopeless romantic.
person *rei*
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS SOO SAD!!! :*< i cried!