rate_review Reviews

Hermiones such a devious minx. :)

Center of the universe? Ahaha

Watermelon?!!

And the watermelon is obviously popped!

"It was a fucking conspiracy."- YES IT WAS!! For the first 4 1/2 chapters I couldn't stop laughing, (good thing I was home alone) after that all I could do was squirm around in my seat! You are probably the only person other than myself that i've ever heard use the phrase "popping a cherry" to refer to a MAN losing his virginity. And yes, popping a virgin was on my "to do" list- I ended up getting married before that- oh well ;) With the exception of Snape's innocence, no one was OOC. Albus always thought the potions master was too serious for his own good. As an adult who has spent time out of school with some of my old teachers I can tell you the side they show the students is not who they are outside the classroom! So yes, the girls were quite believable. <> I still remember a young man with a rather thin physique who also managed to surpise me with a well concealed telephone pole!

I just read the first chapter, and my mind keeps screaming, "Oh, that is wrong. That is just SO wrong." I love it!

LoL awesome story!!! So hot, hermione created a monster when she fucked him, lol loved it!!

I enjoyed that alot.lmas...............Jet

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

I am so glad I didn't find this story until after it was completed, because the cliffhangers were horrible in a really exciting sort of way. You are so evil.

Thanks to Ladytalon for the idea and thank you for writing.