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OMG that was fucking awesome!! hahaha And you rememberd about the head shaveing threats hehe I like the way you write Selen...Since when is Harrenn an Vampire? LoL Its really good though STABBIE STABBIE!!

I'm sorry to be negative, but it always annoys me when the author gives a summary desrciption of their characters right at the beginning of a story. That is like what people do when they play RPGs, which leads me to the probable conclusion that the descriptions are of you and/or your friends, and this is just one great big mary sue. Nothing wrong with Mary sues, but couldnt you find a better way of introducing your characters? Bring the details out more slowly in the narrative instead of bombarding us with them at the outset, which has the effect of telling your everything about them before the story has even begun, so that theyre bored of them already!

Poor Ron...Poor Poor Ron..HAHA Stabbie Stabbie?

YaY Were back!! haha