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for The Lost Cub

by LeoZodiac

person thrnbrooke
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can't wait for chapter 4! You could name it Ombra. Need more!!!!
person jw
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the story just get better
person angel
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great .. im glad that sirius is free...i love the it ...please please please update soon i would love to read more ..later for now

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person alix
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter I am glad Blaise & Draco are getting along with Ginny & Elena. As for names well I like to have a name that kind of means something. So here are some of the ones I thought of: Alistair - Greek - Guardian or protector..... Baldwin - German - A fearless friend and protector.... Dolan - Irish - Dark one.... Donovan - Irish - The dark warrior... Marco - Italian - A warrior... Warren - German - Defender... Quinn - Irish - Wise... Ralph - English - The wolf counselor.... Raven - The perfect name for your black-haired dog.... Just some ideas hope I didn't over do it. Keep writing this is a great story
person Yana
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was a good chapter
person Gabi
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Severus saw, what his daughter was wearing" The best sentence(?) in this chapter.
Sev as father is just... coooool *_*
I hope, the next chapter will be up soon.
person flame
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love all your stories and this one is awesome. i normally don't review because i'm lazy but i just love the name midnight and i thought it might fit for the puppy
person JJ
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How about Merlin??? After all, I bet it's not used too much (ha, ha).
person The Vampire Morrigan
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story so far dear. My suggestion for the cub's name is scath, pronounced ska-th, it's gaelic for shadow, but it's better than saying shadow. Hope you update soon doll.
~Morrigan
person rcj
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
how about "Sombra" (shadow in portuguese) or "Escurid