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for The Lost Cub

by LeoZodiac

person Katrina
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Especially how Harry now has a family, as well as Ginny as a cool friend. Draco is being awesome, and I can totally see this going somewhere.

I love evil Ron and Hermione, also, I love the story line, and if you could update again that would be fantastic! Do you have this posted at another site as well? Cause I might not be able to reach it here all the time....

But for names for the Pup... hmmm... you can use Kage --> Shadow in Jap; or Wolfram --> means Wolf Raven in Teutonic.

Hope these help!

Cheers and keep up the great plot!
person queen rosie
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like the name Toby. but it's up to you in the end ;-) i really like your story also can't wait until the site is back up and running to allow updates.
person amanda
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapters
person Newtype
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sweet fic, can we get more cues I so what to read more please? Pretty please with suger and whippted cream, don't forget the cherry on top?
person PinkPenguinPrincess
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I vote for Aconite. It sounds like sort of elegant, and it represents her two fathers. I know it's silly, but I get the idea that it's important to Elena that her fathers know that she wants them to be her parents, you know? Anyway, this fic is amazing! I so can't wait for more!
person amanda
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
is severus and remus daughter is she a werewolf as well. and it depend of the color. shadow is nice. update soon
person amanda
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
is severus and remus daughter is she a werewolf as well. and it depend of the color. shadow is nice. update soon
person anon
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
person Kagaya
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was fun.
person Rachel
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love your story. It just so original. Oh and a name for the dog how about Phantom? I know lame but it is all i could come up with