I loved all 6 chapters and it was a good story. most people would say not enough sex but i think it was the perfect ending to this amazing story
Not a bad premise for a story, but woefully in need of better editing. Too many cases of mixed verb tenses, jumbled pronouns, bad syntax, and word omissions. While I like the idea that Voldemort would use Ginny to get to Harry, and the idea that Harry and Ginny would save each other (that is what love does, afterall); the tasks in the solo-wizard tournament are just too close to what was already in the books. If ever there was a place for some originality in the HP-verse, that was it. Lots of potential, but needs work.
Not a bad premise for a story, but woefully in need of better editing. Too many cases of mixed verb tenses, jumbled pronouns, bad syntax, and word omissions. While I like the idea that Voldemort would use Ginny to get to Harry, and the idea that Harry and Ginny would save each other (that is what love does, afterall); the tasks in the solo-wizard tournament are just too close to what was already in the books. If ever there was a place for some originality in the HP-verse, that was it. Lots of potential, but needs work.
Not a bad premise for a story, but woefully in need of better editing. Too many cases of mixed verb tenses, jumbled pronouns, bad syntax, and word omissions. While I like the idea that Voldemort would use Ginny to get to Harry, and the idea that Harry and Ginny would save each other (that is what love does, afterall); the tasks in the solo-wizard tournament are just too close to what was already in the books. If ever there was a place for some originality in the HP-verse, that was it. Lots of potential, but needs work.
-Justin Doyle-