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for Beautiful Soulless Marionette

by AlphaTSigma7

person Megan Consoer
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person ccrawley
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a powerful story. Good luck finding a beta. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person Steph
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting...I have read a fanfic or two like this but without the eloquence and plot intricacies (i.e. Hermione's childhood). Please update soon!
person Wilowisp
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written story, and so original. I pray you continue with it. I look forward to reading it to its conclusion. Namaste.
person Susan
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter and well worth the wait. I cannot understand why this does not have more reviews! It is original and the pace is not too fast and not too slow. I am really looking forward to seeing where you take this. Thanks so much for the update.
person Edania
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
liking this alot..coming alot good.
person Susan
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really think you have something very original here. The story caught me as both sad and uplifting. I cannot wait to see where you take it. There are a few mistakes, something a beta would catch(little misspellings, nothing really major), so I hope you continue. Thanks so much!
person lemonade8
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's quite an interesting story you've got there. I am pretty tired, so I'm sure I didn't get all of it, but it held my attention.
person Paprika
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful start to a story. I look forward to reading the upcoming chapters.