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Nice!!! A crossover with Labyrinth. When I started reading this story I kind of had Jareth in mind as Snape's brother. It must have been that fae thing in the title. And then at the end of the chapter the identity of Snape's brother is revealed and look who it is. Labyrinth's Jareth. Nice touch. Both of them are nasty and dropdeadsexy. I see the resemblance quite clearly.

Thank you and I hope to see more soon.
FranB

of all the crossovers that you could do.... harry potter and labyrinth... very interesting.
And putting severus and jareth as brothers? Very different.
I am very much looking forward to this being updated so I can find out what happens next.

Ahahahaha....Jareth.....awesome. David Bowie is pretty amazing and using a Labyrinth reference is never a bad thing. Two thumbs up.

I really like this. I think that you have something that could be really great. There were a couple of canon things that I saw that could be overlooked for plot-and I don't think that they would make much difference if you were to change them, so I am definitely not going to complain about that. The only thing that probably needs to be changed is when Ron is walking back and forth while speaking to Hermione and Harry, you misspelled 'fervently.' However, that was the only misspelling that I saw and that is a major accomplishment, as most authors usually have more than that (I myself usually post with several and catch more even after my beta reads it!). Well done, and I can't wait for your next update.

Oooohhhh, GREAT start! I, too, love King Jareth. Gods! Oh the possibilities! Excellent X-over idea! Normally, I detest crossovers, but THIS one I WILL keep reading.

*Collapses in dead faint muttering something about two of the sexiest fictional charaters ever in the same place*

Ok you have my full mostly undivided, (you can't put Snape and Jareth in the same story and not expect my mind to wander occasionally), attention.