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for Forbidden Lover

by snapesflower

person SnapesPet30
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Totally hot! It will be great for when they are alone during the holidays along as certain people don't mess it up for them.
person Alexandra Noel
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE ADD MORE! THIS STORY IS SO GOOD AND...well...arousing, Everything seems so REAL! I have a feeling they are going to get caught... I love how unsure he is, this story is VERY original! GREAT job! I CAN'T WAIT until the NEXT chapter! ^_^
angelgrl198816 AT hotmail DOT com
my username here (I forgot to log-in on this particular screen) is: angelgrl198816
I should have stories running soon! I am still typing them...
anyways...YOU ARE GREAT, THIS STORY IS GREAT, HELL! ITs ALL GREAT!
Please and thank YOU!,
Alexandra17
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved it
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Fans self quickly* Whew! Hot hot hot! I can't wait to read more! Update again and soon!

Your biggest fan,
Tiffany
person Anon
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. It's great.
person Sevs B1tch
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story.. so naughty..
person Miepje
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Both of them new to the Love-thing, is nice to read.

Can't wait to see what happens next, so update soon please!
person s
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch. 8 next time to read.
person Maria
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you're writing again! Yeah, he is OOC, but I imagine canon Snape as being very inexperienced and repressed, so your characterization is quite believable to me. (My image of SexGod!Snape is strictly fanon, unfortunately). I guess the only really 'OOC' aspect to me is that he'd give in to this while she was still a student, but it works for your story. Please keep it up!
person Tammatha
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Greetings,

I am really like this story ,,can't wait to see what happens next,,,but I must say I would also like to see you finish Evil Personified,,,all the addys I have found for the place the other stories are said to be I can't find they are dead link & I really like your work so this is sad...anyway keep up the good work,,,,PLEASE.

Bright blessings