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for Forbidden Lover

by snapesflower

person KarenDetroit
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Do write some more! I think that you have written something better than 99% of what's out there,
and it needs to be finished.
person Megan Consoer
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Dee Dee
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, it is nice to see an insecure Snape. I love how they are discovering sex together. Please update soon!

person Megan Consoer
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Alexandra Noel
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I LOVE this story! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon!~ This story is absoloutely magnificent! Severus is so sweet! I love the dynamic they have. I wonder when they will be caught...and the sex "scenes" are so real and vivid. I enjoy them immensely
angelgrl198816 AT hotmail DOT com -please e-mail me, if it is not too much trouble, when you update, since this is NOT fanfiction.net I have no way of knowing
Please and Thank YOU!,
Alexandra
AKA
angelgrl198816
person angelgrl198816
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story! I don't care if its OCC, I like...no LOVE this version of Snape! In my um...delight at the end in the shack I well...got TOO into it and went from caressing down my arm to full fledged dragging my long nails down and now...well...it hurts and is red and will be obvious to everyone at school tomorrow. The questions that will come up...but I can't tell them it was because I was sexually aroused can I? No I can not, and from a fan-fiction too. My point is...that it was VERY detailed and so graphic I could totally picture myself as Hermione...lucky girl...again...my point is that you are a great writer and I can't wait for the next installment of this story!
angelgrl198816 AT hotmail DOT com
Please and Thank YOU!,
Alexandra17
person Kim
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I truly love this story. You are an awesome writer!!! Please, yuo have to continue!!!!
person Tanika
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Baby, I absolutely love this story!!!!! I love the inexperienced SS that only wants HG. And I think you are doing a bang up job with their characters. I see Snape like this.

Love the lemons and the plot and just everything.

You go girl!
person Tanika
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Baby, I absolutely love this story!!!!! I love the inexperienced SS that only wants HG. And I think you are doing a bang up job with their characters. I see Snape like this.

Love the lemons and the plot and just everything.

You go girl!
person LillaQ
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I relly like your story! The slow development of their relationship is very nice done.