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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i have just read your story it is great
the only comment i have is that in chapter twelve you say harry has not been to sevs quarters but earlier when sev first told he was a bat animagus they met in his private rooms
just an fyi other than that it was great
the only comment i have is that in chapter twelve you say harry has not been to sevs quarters but earlier when sev first told he was a bat animagus they met in his private rooms
just an fyi other than that it was great
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was not one of your best stories, but i am glad you posted it, it was still very good. thank you.
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
RiffRaff - you're to rough on yourself! I think this story was very readable. I enjoyed all the time it took me to finish all 14 chapters. Please don't call me a simple minded reader. I think the plot was very clever. Matter of fact, the only thought I had was that I'd love to see this developed more. Take Care!
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was an interesting read. As you said not up to your usal standards, but all in all for a "first" story not to shabby.
Love your Writing....
Belle
Love your Writing....
Belle
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much (again) for another beautiful piece of art! Naaaah, this story is soooo cute!! I mean.. the scene in which Snape is hanging upside down in a corner of the roof and Dumbledore tries to coo him out with crickets is so sweet! *lol*
Snape is just too cute in this fic..*sigh* This story was so much fun to read, so thanks again! I hope there will be much more to read soon!
Snape is just too cute in this fic..*sigh* This story was so much fun to read, so thanks again! I hope there will be much more to read soon!
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes, definately not some of your recent stuff, but good none-the-less. If all writers would start out this well, you'd have some stiff competition!!!!!
Just kidding - NO ONE is as good as you! Your unique style will be forever my favourite. After all, you're the first author I've ever read with L, L, and L.
Great stuff and love the new stuff you have posted. Still waiting for Guilty as Sin to be finished.
Thank you very much.
Just kidding - NO ONE is as good as you! Your unique style will be forever my favourite. After all, you're the first author I've ever read with L, L, and L.
Great stuff and love the new stuff you have posted. Still waiting for Guilty as Sin to be finished.
Thank you very much.
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooo...*hug* You are such a darling.
Another completed fic.
You are simply wonderful.
I really hate authors who puts their stories on hiatus left and right or just abandon them. Its so irresponsible of them. *pout* Unfortunately I'm one of them.
I really admire you because I know when you start a story I can always be guaranteed an end.
Oo I'm off to enjoy this story. I read your other stories too, but prefer to read them when I see the word completed cause your stories put me on the edge anticipating what's next.
Kyaa Love You
^_^
Another completed fic.
You are simply wonderful.
I really hate authors who puts their stories on hiatus left and right or just abandon them. Its so irresponsible of them. *pout* Unfortunately I'm one of them.
I really admire you because I know when you start a story I can always be guaranteed an end.
Oo I'm off to enjoy this story. I read your other stories too, but prefer to read them when I see the word completed cause your stories put me on the edge anticipating what's next.
Kyaa Love You
^_^
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whatever you think, i think that this was a really good work (at least, compared to what everybody else writes)
i appreciated the appearence of this story. it kept me up for a while longer than i ment to stay up
thanx =)
i appreciated the appearence of this story. it kept me up for a while longer than i ment to stay up
thanx =)
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really liked it... i wish you'd write a sequel for this or something... ;-; but you say you are not proud of this work? pleaseee continue!
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sorry I went and read all 14 chapters before reviewing but it was wicked fun to read and I totally forgot! Great job.