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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it feels like there should be 15 instead of 14 chappys its like chappy14 was skipped over.
that last scene was hot
that last scene was hot
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked the story line, it was both unique and very intrigueing- not just 'different', but very interesting. Yet the ending, as you yourself said, was too abrupt. Have you ever considered re-working it? You did an amazing job of keeping them in character, which a lot of people don't do very well.
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more it just seems to short. What happens next.
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think an animagus form of a bat would be cool. Imagine the people (Dursleys & such) you could freak out by claiming/appearing to be a vampire
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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story in fact I loved it all, untill the sudden ending! You should either make a second or continue this one you left a lot untold. Or at least delate voldy from this story. That's the biggest thing you left undone.
Wildfire
Wildfire
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wasn't crap at all. I liked it. A. LOT. Espescially the last two chapters! :D
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It has potential.. maybe an added scene of the bonding, some rewording, another chapter in between 13 and 14 and it'll be really good
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great! ^_^.... I really like the idea with the bats, although I must admid to the fact I know nothing of them o_0
Sev's personality is great.... and you also did Charlie good ^-^
Sev's personality is great.... and you also did Charlie good ^-^
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far. Will continue reading. I just wanted to comment: Why didn't anyone use Wingardium Leviosa or something like that?
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think you are miles to hard on yourself. The story line was very good,
loved the fact they were soul mates within their Animagi. O.k. I admit not up to recent
standards but I would be proud to call it one of mine.
P.s. don't wipe any others give up another treat.
loved the fact they were soul mates within their Animagi. O.k. I admit not up to recent
standards but I would be proud to call it one of mine.
P.s. don't wipe any others give up another treat.