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Ooh, not bad, not bad. I was expecting a full out all the way sex scene though and the ending was like "say what?" Overally pretty good. :D

Hey I remember this story, I never thought you'd even finish it lol.
Well I still thought it was good.

This was fun! I do like Snape in this (as I do in all of your fanfics) and Harry... Like you said the end was a little... well unfinished? It felt like you grew tired of the story and desided to end it almost where it started. I think you could do better :P Not that this was bad in any way but reading your other stories I know what you can do. If you ever think about updating it I think a couple more chapters is all that it takes and it will be wonderful... it already is sure but how could you skip the first time they had sex? Now that is just cruel :P *hugs*

I actually liked this...Well all but the sudden ending :P but I usually dont like endings of stories, as I tend to want them to go on forever. I love the idea of Harry as a bat, its just great :D as well as Severus...I also like Severus' personality in this fic of yours (as with all of them)...And the threat to Charlie was good..hmms Have to go find a Harry/Charlie fic now *snorts*...Thanks for posting this :)

Sorry but I can't agree with you!
This story is far from bad it's a great read really!
I loved it and if you say your other atories are much better you can be sure as hell the only thing I'll be doing for the next few weeks in my spare time is reading them!
Great work!
*hugs*
MD

End was a little random. But all around it was a good story.

For being one of your first it is really good. I can see the differences between this one and your recent ones though. There are not as many twists in the plot or things happening that make me go

Well that was a short fic - great love it i th end!

Loved it! Glad AFF works again!

Sweet :)