rate_review Reviews

this was fun to read
thank you

If this is what your early work is like, I look forward to reading the rest of your postings. *Grins* Despite some of the more amateur elements in this story, I liked it quite a bit. Though the dialogue between Harry and Ron and Hermione was kind of painful every now and then. :P On another note, I know you said that there's no plot to this story, but I have to disagree to some extent. I really enjoyed watching the animagus/soulmate bond forming between Severus and Harry. Maybe I've been missing out on a whole chunk of fandom, but I've never read a fic with quite that premise. If it was yours, great work. If it wasn't, you did a wonderful job all the same. (:
~Skyie

an abrupt ending but i liked the story nonetheless i love these type of stories anyways
and if u have the fan art or r going to get it wenever could u please email it to me
thanks
it's ok if u can't

pretty good, but if Harry was in his sixth year when the potion exploded, he should have started his seventh after the summer vacation.
=^-^=

This story is awesome, however i really think that the end is quite abrupt and the bed scene doesn't quite make up for the quick ending. I was quite surprised when I got to the end of chap 14 cos i was expecting some sort of, I don't know, smutty and romantic epilogue or something like mpreg. Neverthless, I really enjoyed this fic and i love the idea of bats (even though i don't have a clue about the bats' mating perspectives). Snape's description of a chubby bat makes me LOl for like 5 mins, but i don't think he looks really that bad. Well your stories are my fav and i'm gonna read more. Continue writing, k. Ja ne.

sadly the story is shorter than your other ones... cries
but i very much enjoyed it
and again, being the sadist i am lol
i love a good hard slapping from snape lol
interesting plot and loads of ice cream loving snape hehe
oxoxo

I really enjoy your stories, I've been reading them over the weekend. However, you really do need someone to check them for grammatical errors, as they take away from the quality of your work.

A most excellent story! I like their animagi forms and their interactions were grand. Wonderful work!~Sophia

Not TOTAL crap, but yes, you've written better. :) Friended you on LJ. Just FYI.

that was a gooood story....wont it be nice to write a sequel?