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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good story. i really enjoyed it. a bit more detail during the action would have made it better. and the sentance where your describing how the release made draco feel, feels a bit long and drawn out. just a few things i noticed. otherwise, i really enjoyed this story.
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed your story. I liked the way you set up the pairing.