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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is very good and very amusing--I'm glad I found it. Keep on going!
And I think Ron's going to choose Harry because that's his best friend. But can two girls/two guys do it? Because then maybe he'll pick...Hermione.
And I think Ron's going to choose Harry because that's his best friend. But can two girls/two guys do it? Because then maybe he'll pick...Hermione.
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have an idea for who the curse maker could be. I highly doubt it's who you have in mind, but I think it works perfectly with the style of smutty comedy you're using.
Back when Bill was at school, he had an affair with Moaning Myrtle (you MUST work the moaning aspect in some how), and now she's blackmailing the curse-breaker since he's in a relationship now.
Plus, if professor Binns gets a go, some one will need to screw myrtle.
However, I doubt even someone as emotionally screwed as Myrtle would make first or second years screw. Nor would she find it interesting (one hopes). I think maybe a retroactive edit limiting it to 3rd years and above would be appropriate.
Don't get me wrong, I don't mind 'minor' tags on fiction, but you weren't likely going to write about first years anyways, right? That's the equivalent of 6th grade.
Also, since everyone has to go twice, wouldn't Dumbledore have to screw a student?
Good story.
Back when Bill was at school, he had an affair with Moaning Myrtle (you MUST work the moaning aspect in some how), and now she's blackmailing the curse-breaker since he's in a relationship now.
Plus, if professor Binns gets a go, some one will need to screw myrtle.
However, I doubt even someone as emotionally screwed as Myrtle would make first or second years screw. Nor would she find it interesting (one hopes). I think maybe a retroactive edit limiting it to 3rd years and above would be appropriate.
Don't get me wrong, I don't mind 'minor' tags on fiction, but you weren't likely going to write about first years anyways, right? That's the equivalent of 6th grade.
Also, since everyone has to go twice, wouldn't Dumbledore have to screw a student?
Good story.
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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is a really interesting story...you really need to update!!!
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
no no no no!!! don't stop here!!! keep going!!!!! i need you to update ... this is an amazing story ... it's a hilarous concept ... PLEASE!!! update!!!
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June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pick Neville, Pick Neville!! LOL
Nice curse, although I was grossed out at the whole Flitwick/Hagrid LOL!!!
Neville/Hermione/Harry/Cho/Seamus
LOL
Nice curse, although I was grossed out at the whole Flitwick/Hagrid LOL!!!
Neville/Hermione/Harry/Cho/Seamus
LOL
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June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg. This is story is kinda... dare I say... Awesome. I have been reading your other works,and you are my favorite author so far. I thought finally I would leave you a review. I love your work and I need updates! Oh, and please add to 'Mary Sue' ! I just started reading that one too, and I love it. A friend and I usually make fun of Mary-sues, but that one was sooooo fucking goooooood.
Much love<3
Much love<3
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May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more more more
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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really funny story, I loved the Hagrid scene, man it was hilairous...
I also think it would be funny if Ron chose Harry..imagine that! Honestly though I think Ron should pick a girl, maybe even Hermione, but you're probably saving her for Draco or something of the sort.
Anyways great writing!
I also think it would be funny if Ron chose Harry..imagine that! Honestly though I think Ron should pick a girl, maybe even Hermione, but you're probably saving her for Draco or something of the sort.
Anyways great writing!
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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're wonderful at writing this kind of humour. I love it. Anyways I have a suggestion..
I think Ron should choose Harry and then Pansy choose Draco. YAY FOR DRACO/HARRY pairing.
Lol, keep it up!
I think Ron should choose Harry and then Pansy choose Draco. YAY FOR DRACO/HARRY pairing.
Lol, keep it up!
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is hilarious!!! I can't wait to see who Ron picks for Pansy!!! LOL!!