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for Deadly Obsession

by xsexxandxcandyx

person Anon
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You should really get yourself a beta. This story is a great plot. However, you have some words misspelled and a lot of the words are put together where there should be a space.

I hope to read more this story is very unique.
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The space bar is your friend... =]
person luvhp
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
patiently waiting to see Hermione snag Draco. Loving it so far. Please continue.
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is really good but im confused is Hermione head girl and if not who is?
~DeY
person alice
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its ok a good story keep writing
person pickles87
schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good plot. some boys have no clue even if it's on the front page of the daily prophet.
person Ami
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow your stories have me very caught up I can't wait for an update
always a fan
Ami
person Megan Consoer
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person RandH4ever
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There's a really good plot here, but you should have had it beta'd before you posted it. If you need one, e-mail me at kirsten56@lycos.com, and I'll help you.
person Cas
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Review hehe dirty draco tisk tisk tisk