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for The Perils Of Too Many Orgasms

by vlredreign

person QueenB
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story, interesting, witty and fascinating by turns. I've been delving into HP fanfic for the better part of a year now. After having sampled HP/DM, seguing into HP/SS (yummy), I've decided to give HP/LM a try. This story has whetted my appetite for more and will be the first HP/LM fanfic to join my HP slash collection.

Another story I've read points out that some of the most powerful wizards of Harry's day were all mixed bloods, giving the lie to Voldemort's crazed vision of a Pureblood world. Harry's mother was a muggleborn witch, Hermione's parents were muggles, Snape's father was a muggle and Voldemort himself came from muggle/witch parentage. No one would say that these people suffered a diminution of power from their mixed heritage so Voldemort's goal was flawed right from the start; anyone with sense could have seen that.

Your story made me consider all of this during Lucius and Harry's frank discussion about muggles and their place in the wizarding world. The segue into Harry's drunken rant and subsequent fall into Malfoy's bed were excellent and made me wish there were more chapters in this story.

Thanks for this entry. I will be sure to look out for more of your HP/LM fics on this website.
person GGreen
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic. Great speech.
person Kelly Zuerlein
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well done very well done. Makes me wish I was there.
K.
person Anon
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haaa. That was brilliant. I loved it. Nice pornish bits. I hope you know you spawned fan-arts.

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person Anon
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haaa. That was brilliant. I loved it. Nice pornish bits. I hope you know you spawned fan-arts.

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schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Waait. Wah. What happend. It totally logged me out. Meh. Those posts above were mine. Don't know what happened. Randomly logged off and multi-review. Ah well. Again, Lovely story. ^_^
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^^
Loved reading!
Hotness!
Any chance for a sequel?
person ice owl
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely actually. I quite enjoyed that one! More please?
person Viki
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*dies* That was abso-bloody-lutely fanstasmic! No no no...it was ORGASMIC!!!! i absolutely loved the way you said this too, "If there was a medal for cock-sucking, Lucius would receive the Order of Merlin, First Class." Made my night. Bravo!