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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow here is a fic with an OFC that is actually interesting. I commend you on a well written fic, your vocabulary and use of description is exceptional, and I really enjoyed how you incorporated the explanation of why there would be vampires at Hogwarts seamlessly. It actually makes SENSE. Also that one last bit at the end was a nice touch . . . Lemonade . . lol.
But as a word of advice if you continue on with this please do not let your OFC turn into a Mary Sue, many good authors have made this crucial mistake! It would be so disappointing to see such a promising fic crash and burn.
But as a word of advice if you continue on with this please do not let your OFC turn into a Mary Sue, many good authors have made this crucial mistake! It would be so disappointing to see such a promising fic crash and burn.